How to Write Job Descriptions That Attract Top Talent

In this guide, we'll cover how to write job descriptions that stand out, attract qualified candidates, and set realistic expectations from the start.

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Mathias Beke

Tech Lead

Recruitment

Recruitment

Recruitment

Illustration of a bear holding a paper with the text "Looking for a unicorn"
Illustration of a bear holding a paper with the text "Looking for a unicorn"
Illustration of a bear holding a paper with the text "Looking for a unicorn"

A job description is often the first impression a candidate has of your company. And for many recruiters, it's also one of the most overlooked parts of the hiring process.

Most job descriptions are boring at best and confusing at worst. They're stuffed with jargon, padded with generic requirements, and written as if candidates should feel lucky to apply. In a competitive market, that approach doesn't work.

The best candidates have options. They're scanning dozens of job postings, and they'll skip past anything that feels like it was copied from a template or written by a committee. If you want top talent to actually read your job description and feel compelled to apply, you need to write something worth reading.

In this guide, we'll cover how to write job descriptions that stand out, attract qualified candidates, and set realistic expectations from the start.


Why Job Descriptions Matter More Than You Think

They Filter Candidates In and Out

A well-written job description attracts the right people and discourages the wrong ones. Vague descriptions attract everyone (including many unqualified applicants). Overly demanding descriptions scare away good candidates who don't tick every box. The goal is precision: clear enough that qualified candidates see themselves in the role, specific enough that unqualified candidates self-select out.

They Set Expectations

Misaligned expectations are a leading cause of early turnover. When the job doesn't match what was advertised, new hires leave. A honest, detailed job description ensures candidates know what they're signing up for before they accept an offer.

They Reflect Your Employer Brand

Your job description communicates more than just role requirements. The tone, the language, the way you describe your company: all of it shapes how candidates perceive you. A poorly written description suggests a poorly run company. A thoughtful one suggests an organization that values clarity and professionalism.

They Impact Your Sourcing Efficiency

When your job description is clear about must-haves versus nice-to-haves, you spend less time screening unsuitable candidates. Your recruitment funnel fills with relevant applicants rather than a flood of mismatches.


The Anatomy of an Effective Job Description

Job Title

The title is your headline. It determines whether candidates click through or scroll past.

Keep it clear and searchable. Candidates search for jobs using standard terms. "Software Engineer" gets found. "Code Ninja" or "Digital Rockstar" does not. Creative titles might seem fun, but they hurt discoverability and often make candidates cringe.

Be specific about level. "Marketing Manager" is clearer than "Marketing Professional." "Senior Account Executive" tells candidates more than "Account Executive." Level indicators help candidates quickly assess whether the role matches their experience.

Avoid internal jargon. Your company might call the role "Client Success Specialist II," but candidates are searching for "Customer Success Manager." Use the title that matches how people actually look for jobs.

Opening Summary

The first paragraph is your hook. Most job descriptions open with a generic company boilerplate that candidates skip. Instead, lead with what makes this role compelling.

Answer the candidate's first question: "Why should I care?" What's interesting about this job? What will they work on? What impact will they have? Give them a reason to keep reading.

Keep it brief. Three to four sentences maximum. You're not writing an essay. You're giving candidates enough context to want to learn more.

Example of a weak opening: "XYZ Corp is a leading provider of enterprise solutions with offices in 12 countries. Founded in 1987, we have grown to over 5,000 employees and serve Fortune 500 clients across multiple industries."

Example of a stronger opening: "We're looking for a product manager to lead our mobile app team. You'll own the roadmap for an app used by 2 million people daily, working directly with engineering and design to ship features that users actually notice. This role reports to the VP of Product and has real influence over company direction."

The first version is about the company. The second is about the candidate and what they'll actually do.

Responsibilities

This section describes what the person will actually do day-to-day. It's where many job descriptions go wrong by either being too vague or too exhaustive.

Focus on outcomes, not activities. "Manage social media accounts" is an activity. "Grow our social media presence and engagement to support lead generation goals" is an outcome. Candidates want to know what success looks like, not just what tasks they'll perform.

Be specific. "Work with cross-functional teams" means nothing. "Collaborate with the sales team to identify customer pain points and translate them into product requirements" tells candidates something real.

Limit the list. Five to eight key responsibilities is plenty. If you list fifteen things, candidates can't tell what actually matters. Prioritize the responsibilities that define the role.

Use action verbs. Start each point with a verb: lead, develop, analyze, create, manage. This makes responsibilities concrete and scannable.

Order by importance. Put the most critical responsibilities first. Candidates often skim, so front-load what matters most.

Requirements

This is where you list what candidates need to have to be considered. It's also where most job descriptions inflate expectations and drive away qualified applicants.

Distinguish must-haves from nice-to-haves. Be honest with yourself. Do you actually require a master's degree, or would you hire someone great without one? Does the role truly need eight years of experience, or could someone with five years and strong skills succeed? If everything is a requirement, nothing is.

Avoid arbitrary experience thresholds. "5+ years of experience" is often a guess. Think about what you're actually trying to signal. Is it depth of expertise? Leadership capability? Specific skills? State what you really need rather than defaulting to years.

Focus on skills and capabilities. "Experience with Salesforce" is more useful than "3 years in a sales role." Skills are what enable someone to do the job. Time in a seat doesn't guarantee competence.

Be realistic about your market. If you require expertise in five different programming languages plus management experience plus an MBA plus willingness to relocate, you're describing a unicorn. Either the role is unrealistic, or you're listing wishes instead of requirements.

Consider removing degree requirements. Unless the role legally requires specific credentials (like a medical or legal license), question whether a degree is truly necessary. Many excellent candidates are self-taught or came through non-traditional paths.

Nice-to-Haves

Separate your wish list from your requirements. This section signals to candidates that they don't need everything listed to apply, while still giving an idea of what would make someone stand out.

Keep it short. Three to five items. If your nice-to-have list is longer than your requirements list, you've miscategorized things.

Be genuine. Only list things that would actually influence your decision. If knowledge of a particular tool wouldn't really sway you, don't include it.

Compensation and Benefits

Salary transparency is increasingly expected, and in many regions it's becoming legally required. Even where it isn't mandated, including compensation information benefits everyone.

Include a salary range. Candidates want to know if the role matches their expectations before investing time in applying. Withholding salary information wastes everyone's time on candidates who would never accept your offer.

Be honest about the range. If you list €50,000 to €80,000 but only intend to hire at €55,000, you're setting up a negotiation that feels like bait-and-switch. Candidates notice.

Highlight benefits that matter. Remote work options, flexible hours, professional development budgets, parental leave: these are differentiators. Generic "competitive benefits package" language doesn't tell candidates anything useful.

Don't oversell. If your benefits are standard for your industry, present them honestly. Dressing up basic offerings as exceptional perks damages trust when candidates learn the reality.

Company Information

Candidates want to know who they'd be working for. But this section should complement the role description, not dominate it.

Keep it brief. A short paragraph about what your company does, your mission, and your culture. Save the detailed history for your careers page.

Focus on what candidates care about. Team size, company stage, growth trajectory, and work environment are more relevant than founding date or investor names.

Be authentic. If you're a small startup, don't pretend you're a polished corporation. If you're a large enterprise, don't try to sound like a scrappy startup. Candidates figure out the truth eventually.

Location and Work Arrangement

Remote, hybrid, or on-site? This is now one of the first things candidates look for.

Be specific. "Hybrid" means different things to different companies. "In-office Tuesdays and Thursdays, remote the rest of the week" is clear. "Flexible hybrid arrangement" is vague.

State location requirements clearly. If the role requires being in a specific city, say so. If it's open to candidates anywhere in a country or region, state that. If there are time zone requirements for remote roles, mention them.

Don't hide the details. Candidates will find out eventually. If you require five days in office, don't advertise "flexible work options" and reveal the truth in the interview.


Writing Style and Tone

Write Like a Human

Job descriptions written by committee often sound like legal documents. Avoid corporate jargon, buzzwords, and empty phrases. Write like you're explaining the role to a friend.

Skip the buzzwords. "Synergy," "leverage," "results-driven," "self-starter," and "dynamic" add nothing. They're filler that candidates' eyes skip over.

Use "you" language. "You will lead a team of five designers" is more engaging than "The successful candidate will lead a team of five designers." Speaking directly to the reader creates connection.

Keep sentences short. Long, complex sentences are hard to scan. Break them up.

Be Inclusive

Certain language patterns discourage candidates from underrepresented groups from applying.

Watch for gendered language. Words like "aggressive," "dominant," and "competitive" skew masculine. Words like "supportive" and "collaborative" skew feminine. Aim for neutral language that doesn't code for any particular group.

Avoid superlatives that intimidate. "World-class expert" and "top-tier talent" make candidates question whether they're good enough. Strong candidates are often the most likely to doubt themselves.

Reconsider "culture fit" language. Phrases like "work hard, play hard" or references to team happy hours can signal an exclusionary culture, even unintentionally.

Use tools to check. Several free tools analyze job descriptions for biased language. Run your descriptions through them before posting.

Keep It Scannable

Candidates don't read job descriptions word by word. They scan for relevant information.

Use clear headers. Break up the page so candidates can jump to what interests them.

Use bullet points for lists. Responsibilities and requirements are easier to scan as bullets than as paragraphs.

Keep paragraphs short. Three to four sentences maximum. Walls of text don't get read.

Put key information early. If the salary is competitive or the role is fully remote, say so near the top.


Common Mistakes to Avoid

The Laundry List

Some job descriptions list every possible task the person might ever do. This signals disorganization and suggests the role lacks focus. If you can't summarize the role's core purpose in a few bullet points, you may not have a clear enough job definition.

The Unicorn Hunt

Requiring ten different skills, multiple certifications, and extensive experience in everything guarantees you'll either find no one or settle for someone who exaggerated. Decide what's truly essential and be realistic about the candidate pool.

The Copy-Paste Job

Generic descriptions that could apply to any company don't attract anyone. If you've copied a template without customizing it for your specific role and organization, candidates can tell. They'll apply with equal genericness.

The Negative Tone

"Must be able to handle pressure" and "no hand-holding" and "only serious candidates should apply" create a hostile impression. Candidates read these as warning signs about the work environment.

The Missing Information

Omitting salary, location requirements, or work arrangement details forces candidates to guess or apply blindly. You'll waste time on candidates who would have self-selected out with complete information.

The Oversell

Describing every role as "exciting," "fast-paced," and "game-changing" sets unrealistic expectations. When the reality is more mundane (as most jobs are), new hires feel deceived.


Job Description Checklist

Before posting, verify your job description includes:

Essential information:

  • Clear, searchable job title

  • Compelling opening paragraph

  • Five to eight key responsibilities focused on outcomes

  • Requirements separated into must-haves and nice-to-haves

  • Salary range or compensation information

  • Location and work arrangement details

  • Brief company information

Quality checks:

  • Written in clear, jargon-free language

  • Uses "you" to address the candidate

  • Scannable with headers and bullet points

  • Reviewed for biased or exclusionary language

  • Realistic requirements that match your actual hiring criteria

  • Honest representation of the role and company


Final Thoughts

A job description is a small investment of time with outsized impact. It determines who applies to your roles, shapes their expectations, and influences whether they accept your offer.

The best job descriptions are honest, specific, and written with the candidate's perspective in mind. They answer the questions candidates actually have: What will I do? What do I need to succeed? What will I earn? What's it like to work here?

Writing good job descriptions isn't about clever marketing or selling candidates on a fantasy. It's about clear communication that helps the right people find you while respecting everyone's time.

Take the extra hour to write something genuine. Your candidate quality (and your sanity during screening) will thank you.

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